this week we are working on form.
the shape poems will not translate well here, but we tried our hand at haiku (5/7/5 syllables), cinquain (2/4/6/8/2), and tanka (5/7/5/7/7) among others
morning
when breakfast is done
cereal boxes litter
my nice clean counter
daydreams in the sun
I am a knight with a castle
in this world, I am me
food fight
melon
high flying food
popcorn zooms overhead
carrots and onions get even
very odd
winter
icy blowing
wind makes me huddle deep
in the blankets but i still have
cold feet
in the dead of night
the ice cream bandit attacks
sneeking through the halls
snatching up entire stocks
what will I eat for dessert?
ridged rules of rhyme -
how do the Japanese cope?
counting every line
it's hard; i feel like a dope
so i say: No TANKA-you!
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